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I love the little details in the pixels and the fluidity of it all. Great job!

maruki responds:

Thanks a lot!

What a gorgeous short film. It's sort of difficult to understand the gist of it, but I think it's fluidity and beautiful watercolors make up for it.

Very short, but it gets the point across. Some sort of sound would be nice, even if it was just some sort of car/city background noise. I liked the stop-motion for when the fire hydrant was about to hit, but I think that moment could have been expanded on a bit more for extra dramatics. Also, at the very end, you need to make the screen showing how Humberto died longer. It's a longer paragraph, so you need to give the adequate amount of time for people to read it without most of them having to pause the video.

Menmaro responds:

Thanks a lot for your critical analysis! I will make sure my next work will be much better, I had intended to put sound in but unfortunately I ran out of time and couldn't add sound. I am still very grateful though!

Nice animation and short-and-sweet to the point. I really like all of the frames for the small facial movements- to me those are the real selling points of animations, and this accomplished that. Good job on this!

BooneBum responds:

Thanks for the great review :)

Funny, nice, and a good length. It kept me somewhat entertained for the 1:26 which is surprising since I normally don't like watching animations, so that's a good thing. The art style was okay for the amount of work put in to it, so good job on that. You did a great job on this, keep it up!

Nice flow; you're right, it's very short, but I really appreciate all of the small movements here. Good job, though next time you should start working on making them longer.

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