I love the little details in the pixels and the fluidity of it all. Great job!
I love the little details in the pixels and the fluidity of it all. Great job!
Thanks a lot!
Very short, but it gets the point across. Some sort of sound would be nice, even if it was just some sort of car/city background noise. I liked the stop-motion for when the fire hydrant was about to hit, but I think that moment could have been expanded on a bit more for extra dramatics. Also, at the very end, you need to make the screen showing how Humberto died longer. It's a longer paragraph, so you need to give the adequate amount of time for people to read it without most of them having to pause the video.
Thanks a lot for your critical analysis! I will make sure my next work will be much better, I had intended to put sound in but unfortunately I ran out of time and couldn't add sound. I am still very grateful though!
Nice animation and short-and-sweet to the point. I really like all of the frames for the small facial movements- to me those are the real selling points of animations, and this accomplished that. Good job on this!
Thanks for the great review :)
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